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@great-big-stees said
Once bitten, twice shy?
I was hauled off my bicycle as a teenager by a trained retired German Shepard Police dog. The boy that lived there and I were having a race to his place and he was ahead of me going up the driveway.

The retired Police dog thought I was chasing him hauled me off of my bicycle and when I hit the dirt driveway he put his two front paws on my chest, snarling at me. I didn't move untill the boys mother called the dog off of me. Been a little nervous of Big Dogs ever since! 😉 ( True Story )

-VR

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@very-rusty said
I was hauled off my bicycle as a teenager by a trained retired German Shepard Police dog. The boy that lived there and I were having a race to his place and he was ahead of me going up the driveway.

The retired Police dog thought I was chasing him hauled me off of my bicycle and when I hit the dirt driveway he put his two front paws on my chest, snarling at me. I didn' ...[text shortened]... er called the dog off of me. Been a little nervous of Big Dogs ever since! 😉 ( True Story )

-VR
Spelling: 7/10

Shepard = shepherd
Untill = until

Punctuation: 7/10

Should be a comma after “chasing him”
Boys mother = boy’s mother

Grammar = 8/10

Dog off of me =dog off me

Other than that, not bad for a troll.


@pianoman1 said
Other than that not bad for a troll.
Comma after that.


@pianoman1 said
Spelling: 7/10

Shepard = shepherd
Untill = until

Punctuation: 7/10

Should be a comma after “chasing him”
Boys mother = boy’s mother

Grammar = 8/10

Dog off of me =dog off me

Other than that not bad for a troll.
If you could somehow set that to music I would be entirely happy.


@handyandy said
Comma after that.
I'm going to argue the case sir for the 'optional comma.'


@handyandy said
Comma after that.
I concur.


@ghost-of-a-duke said
If you could somehow set that to music I would be entirely happy.
Give me a few days ........


@great-big-stees said
Once bitten, twice shy?
YOU should have broughtten some treats for the Big Dogg.

Doggs cannot be held responsible for what happens to you when you do not.


@very-rusty said
I was hauled off my bicycle as a teenager by a trained retired German Shepard Police dog. The boy that lived there and I were having a race to his place and he was ahead of me going up the driveway.

The retired Police dog thought I was chasing him hauled me off of my bicycle and when I hit the dirt driveway he put his two front paws on my chest, snarling at me. I didn' ...[text shortened]... er called the dog off of me. Been a little nervous of Big Dogs ever since! 😉 ( True Story )

-VR
See, the thing is, it is not that Big Doggs do not like you.

It is just that, Big Doggs insist that you know your place.


@ghost-of-a-duke said
I'm going to argue the case sir for the 'optional comma.'
I believe the comma should be used when necessary to help the reader. The pronoun that is a detour sign.


@bigdoggproblem said
See, the thing is, it is not that Big Doggs do not like you.

It is just that, Big Doggs insist that you know your place.
He thought I was chasing after the other boy and was protecting him. It is just that simple. I thought that would be obvious and I wouldn't have to spell it out.

-VR

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LOL @ goad, Andy, and Piano guy, arguing over my punctuation and spelling. I know I'll lose sleep over that tonight. Hope you boys are proud of yourselves! 😛 😉

-VR


@very-rusty said
LOL @ goad, Andy, and Piano guy, arguing over my punctuation and spelling. I know I'll lose sleep over that tonight. Hope you boys are proud of yourselves!
Do you see an argument?

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@very-rusty said
LOL @ goad, Andy, and Piano guy, arguing over my punctuation and spelling. I know I'll lose sleep over that tonight. Hope you boys are proud of yourselves!
Actually, neither Ghost nor I said anything about your punctuation and spelling.


@handyandy said
Actually, neither Ghost nor I said anything about your punctuation and spelling.
You were talking about a comma and goad disagreed with you. piano guy did all the hard work!!! 😛 😉

-VR