Originally posted by Kribzyes, you are right - excuse me - it's late here and i've been in front of the pc too long. explains some of the moves i've been making too...😞
This is unlike any haiku I have ever encountered.
I dare say it's not a haiku at all.
Cunningly disguised
Prolific alerter's back
Sleeping village waits
how's that? no deep i admit, but a haiku at least?
Originally posted by royalchickenyes that's it - ignore my last raft of excuses - i'm hanging on to the back of a truck...
It doesn't quite scan; it's a bit like one of Bobby Shaftoe' haikus in ''Cryptonomicon'', when he can't count syllables on his fingers because he's hanging onto the back of a truck.