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Originally posted by darvlay
Yeah but where's the fun in talking about the seasons? Why does everything have to be so by the book? Don't you like breaking the rules, Skeeter? You wanna party?
Nah. Everytime I start a party I get suspended and/or banned. I got kicked from M&M, censored and censured at Americlan and have had more forum boots here than all the other posters combined. I suspect that if it were not for my game load I would have had a refund and a DCM long ago.
Sorry 'bout the haitu pedantacisim, its my Lit education and besides, when you compose my haitu ( and you are going to ) I would like it to be correct, literally.

skeeter

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Snow falls on the ground
Winter seems to now be here
Hard drive is still broke!

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Haiku

The Japanese have replaced the impersonal and unhelpful Microsoft error messages with Haiku poetry messages. Haiku poetry has strict construction rules - each poem has only 17 syllables; 5 syllables in the first, 7 in the second, 5 in the third. They are used to communicate a timeless message, often achieving a wistful, yearning and powerful insight through extreme brevity. Here are 16 actual error messages from Japan.

Your file was so big.
It might be very useful.
But now it is gone.

The Web site you seek
Cannot be located, but
Countless more exist.

Chaos reigns within.
Reflect, repent, and reboot.
Order shall return.

Program aborting:
Close all that you have worked on.
You ask far too much.

Windows NT crashed.
I am the Blue Screen of Death.
No one hears your screams.

Yesterday it worked.
Today it is not working.
Windows is like that.

First snow, then silence.
This thousand dollar screen dies
So beautifully.

With searching comes loss
And the presence of absence:
"My Novel" not found.

The Tao that is seen
Is not the true Tao-until
You bring fresh toner.

Stay the patient course.
Of little worth is your ire.
The network is down.

A crash reduces
Your expensive computer
To a simple stone.

Three things are certain:
Death, taxes and lost data.
Guess which has occurred.

You step in the stream,
But the water has moved on.
This page is not here.

Out of memory.
We wish to hold the whole sky,
But we never will.

Having been erased,
The document you're seeking
Must now be retyped.

Serious error.
All shortcuts have disappeared.
Screen. Mind. Both are blank....



http://www.sscnet.ucla.edu/geog/gessler/topics/haiku.htm

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Originally posted by skeeter
hai.ku[/] \'hi(,)ku\n,pl[b]haiku[Jap] : an unrhymed Japanese poem of three lines containing 5, 7 and 5 syllables respectively, referring in some way to one of the seasons of the year, and constituting a late 19th century development of the hokku.

skeeter [/b]
skeet, why spoil the fun?
dye your hair red like satan.
Summer. Happy now?

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Breakfast

The chicken's ova
atomized, seasoned and fried.
Fluffy and yellow.

Mmmmmmm....

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Lack of reaction
To Darvlay's haiku profiles
Is disappointing

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perhaps his subjects
are less concerned with haiku
and more with sonnets

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This seems a bit hard
But perhaps I am able
To weather the storm.

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In celebration
of my four-twentieth rec,
guess what I will do?

😉

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Originally posted by darvlay
In celebration
of my four-twentieth rec,
guess what I will do?

😉
I hazard a guess
That the men in blue velvet
Would like some warning

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But knowing Darvlay
their time is surely numbered
Warning comes to late

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The Japanese by,
Trying to be too clever,
Devised the Haiku.

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Originally posted by skeeter
Hmmmm.....you guys haven't got the [b]haiku quite right.

I quote from Websters Third ( Unabridged ) :

hai.ku[/] \'hi(,)ku\n,pl[b]haiku[Jap] : an unrhymed Japanese poem of three lines containing 5, 7 and 5 syllables respectively, referring in some way to one of the seasons of the year, and constituting a late 19th century development of the hokku.

skeeter [/b]
Yeah but the thread title is Hai - cuckoo, sort of prepares the ground for a little bastardization.