Haiku

Originally posted by Officer Dibble
miserable out;
i took the jubilee line.
tfc still slow.

Which is the better?
Squashed underground / cold above
but I have no choice

I wonder if my wet shoes
will be dry again by morning?

Originally posted by orangutan
Which is the better?
Squashed underground / cold above
but I have no choice

I wonder if my wet shoes
will be dry again by morning?

it's a good question.
luckily i wasn't squashed;
your last line should be.

Originally posted by Officer Dibble
it's a good question.
luckily i wasn't squashed;
your last line should be.

extra syllables and
missing syllables too
such are my haikus
😞

Originally posted by orangutan
extra syllables and
missing syllables too
such are my haikus
😞

that's hilarious.
i have given you a rec.
it's worth zilch. zero.

Originally posted by orangutan
extra syllables and
missing syllables too
such are my haikus
😞

wow, you really suck
you have reached the pinnacle
you're really just... bad.

Originally posted by rubberjaw30
wow, you really suck
you have reached the pinnacle
you're really just... bad.

so you missed the joke.
i could not be less surprised.
but yes, you can count.

Originally posted by Officer Dibble
so you missed the joke.
i could not be less surprised.
but yes, you can count.

It was too subtle.
Too subtle for him at least.
Happens easily.

Originally posted by Officer Dibble
so you missed the joke.
i could not be less surprised.
but yes, you can count.

Avatar problem:
Picture shows at the address,
Broken in forum.

Originally posted by Officer Dibble
that's hilarious.
i have given you a rec.
it's worth zilch. zero.

You rec'd my Haiku -
I thought that I had wrecked it?
[fix your avatar]

Originally posted by Nordlys
It was too subtle.
Too subtle for him at least.
Happens easily.

Nice hat there Noodles
Do you make them to order?
I'd like a green one.

Originally posted by Nordlys
Avatar problem:
Picture shows at the address,
Broken in forum.

Originally posted by orangutan
[fix your avatar]

butters is missing?
he shows up fine on my screen.
hm. i'll think again.

Originally posted by Officer Dibble
butters is missing?
he shows up fine on my screen.
hm. i'll think again.

butters has returned -
a second new avatar.
can you see him now?

Originally posted by Officer Dibble
butters has returned -
a second new avatar.
can you see him now?

officer - sorry
but avatar is hiding
have to 'view image'

Originally posted by Officer Dibble
butters has returned -
a second new avatar.
can you see him now?

Avatar not there
Do you like my new hat then?
I think green suits me

Originally posted by orangutan
Avatar not there
Do you like my new hat then?
I think green suits me

yes it's a fine hat
somewhat à la robin hood.
i must find butters.