Haiku

Originally posted by orangutan
Company year end!
To the shareholder targets -
I say "pah!" (three times)!!

Salesmen's promise: "We can do"
Customer : "Why is it late?"

Ten minutes no post
Way too long to wait for you
We post without you

Originally posted by Nordlys
Glad to see you post!
I thought you were gone for good -
Ten minutes no post!

Originally posted by orangutan
I've been 'bit busy
Working and all that (away)
Back now though (for now)

What's your excuse then? Where have
You been hiding - You've been missed!

Originally posted by Acemaster
Your fist line is wrong
Bad luck will come unto you
Unless you get straght

Originally posted by orangutan
what is the word "straght"?
Nothing wrong with my haiku
But yours needs checking!

Originally posted by orangutan
what is the word "straght"?
Nothing wrong with my haiku
But yours needs checking!

Originally posted by Nordlys
And what's a fist line?
That sounds a bit aggressive.
He might want to box.

Originally posted by Acemaster
"Straight" misses it's "i"
You're first line has four letters
but I still like you 😉

Originally posted by orangutan
My f[b]irst line has lots ...
In a haiku it is the
syllables we count
🙂

So, if you put down you're fist
I just might like you as well
😛[/b]

Originally posted by Acemaster
Your haiku is fine
I looked at it wrong, sorry
My fist is down now 🙂

Originally posted by orangutan
Fist down now - that's good
No fighting in this thread please
(well ... not too often)

You do not like me?
I really want to cry(not
but my smiley will :,(

i am hungover.
i have to drive to essex
for a wedding gig.

it's a bad combination.
i should adopt nordlys' rules.

Long time no haiku...
Second time I've used this line...
Still good to be back!