Originally posted by sonhouseYour piece is full of spelling mistakes and grammatical errors (differant, capital letters in the middle of sentences etc.). It is full of cliches and tired symbolism.
I forgot, the general forum is for fluff, no serious stuff allowed.
I won't forget.
You also posted it in the middle of the thread for voting on the closed 5th round of the competition. If you had read this or any other prose competition thread you would know how it works. You mail you piece to hopscotch and he posts them all so you don't know who wrote them.
Also, bump for more voting.
Originally posted by XanthosNZSorry, I thought they were all written by scotch in an ego exercise,
Your piece is full of spelling mistakes and grammatical errors (differant, capital letters in the middle of sentences etc.). It is full of cliches and tired symbolism.
You also posted it in the middle of the thread for voting on the closed 5th round of the competition. If you had read this or any other prose competition thread you would know how it work ...[text shortened]... opscotch and he posts them all so you don't know who wrote them.
Also, bump for more voting.
didn't see the beginning of this one. I just blurted it out with no
editing.
Originally posted by RagnorakToo many things going on in my chaotic life right now, I have to
So are you going to vote?
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leave the forums for a few months, my former company going belly
up, trying to get our little band going (the gladsmiths), my adopted
son being attacked in a racially motivated family attack, they hit my
son with their car, not moving fast but knocked him over and the
whole family attacked him, its a long story but I am in the middle
of getting those (chose proper explative) in jail. I want
to apologize to Hopscotch because I didn't see the original post on
this, I thought out of the blue, he presents some stories all written
by him and give me pats on the back which is why I blurted out my
so-called story. Nice chatting with all of you but I have some serious
itshay going on here. See you in time.
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Originally posted by sonhouseThere's no way I could've written all those pieces, some of them have spelling errors.
Too many things going on in my chaotic life right now, I have to
leave the forums for a few months, my former company going belly
up, trying to get our little band going (the gladsmiths), my adopted
son being attacked in a racially motivated family attack, they hit my
son with their car, not moving fast but knocked him over and the
whole family attac ...[text shortened]... y. Nice chatting with all of you but I have some serious
itshay going on here. See you in time.
Apology accepted, good luck with sorting your itshay.
