1. Standard memberHomerJSimpson
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    13 Nov '06 19:58
    I need help bedlam, I would appreciate any tutorial you could offer me
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    [Event "Challenge"]
    [Site "http://www.chessatwork.com"]
    [Date "2006.10.09"]
    [Round "?"]
    [White "DoctorDara"]
    [Black "JoJoMinno"]
    [Result "0-1"]
    [PlyCount "42"]
    [EventDate "2006.??.??"]

    1. Nf3 d5
    2. d4 Nf6
    3. Nc3 e6


    Here I dont like Nc3 much, I dont play d4 openings as white and never play symmetrical d4 as black so im not really up with all the theory....but Nc3 seems to be a little odd. In d4 openings white tends to need the c pawn in action, more often than not playing c4 so blocking it in with the knight on move 3 probably isnt the best idea.

    Quick check on the Gensunasumus online opening database shows that from this position
    N.Nc3
    29 games
    25% white wins
    23% draw
    51% black wins

    c4 probably would have been better in the position then you can play your Nc3 after the pawn has moved.


    4. e3 Nc6

    Im not a fan of e3 either 🙂 I like aggressive play, this tends to mean putting the pieces on the most active squares possible. Here Id play Bf4 or Bg5. After e3 you could have some trouble getting the dark square bishop into the game.

    5. Bb5 a6
    6. Bxc6+ bxc6
    7. Ne5 Bd7
    8. Nxd7 Qxd7


    After Ne5 Bd7 the knight has tension on the bishop (ie the knight can take the bishop and the bishop cant take the knight). Its best not to trade your pieces that have tension on the opponents pieces unless you are gaining something, here the bishop isnt very active and certainly not a threat, the knight on the other hand is well posted. Id probably play 0-0 here, black for his part is going to play c5 at some point, doubled pawns arent as weak as they are often made out to be...pawn weaknesses should be pushed and if you have the chance to undouble them then its often a good idea to do just that.

    9. a4 Bd6

    a4 I cant work out...grabbing space on the queenside?

    10. O-O O-O

    I dont much like whites position here, a lot of the dislike stems from whites bishop on c1.

    11. Re1 Rfe8
    12. e4 e5


    Re1 and e4 I do like, need to activate the bishop

    13. dxe5 Bxe5

    Here id play Bg5 bring the so far problem piece into the game and letting black worry about having his kingside pawns doubled. Here I guess black would play 13..Nxe4 14.Nxe4 exd4 15.Rxe4 if black then plays exd4 white just plays 16.Rxd4 and looks fine. White should avoid trying to be smart and grabbing the pawn with 16.Rxe1 Rxe1 17.Qxd4 since Bxh2+ picks up whites queen.

    14. exd5 cxd5

    Here exd5 is probably to be avoided as you will undouble blacks pawns for him. Maybe the simple Qd3 is playable just getting the queen off the back rank having the option of sliding it along the 3rd rank if needed ie to defend h2. Also with the queen off the back rank once the bishop moves the rooks will be connected which is always a good thing 🙂

    15. Nxd5 Nxd5

    Just an oversight. Again Bg5 was probably the best move, while this allows black to play Bxc3 at least white will manage to get all their pieces into the game.

    16. g3 Rad8
    17. Bf4 Bxf4


    You should avoid creating weaknesses around your king which your last two moves did. Maybe c3 instead of g3 to try and blunt blacks bishop.

    18. gxf4 Rxe1+
    19. Qxe1 Qg4+
    20. Kf1 Nxf4
    21. f3 Qg2# 0-1
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    13 Nov '06 20:26
    Originally posted by HomerJSimpson
    I need help bedlam, I would appreciate any tutorial you could offer me
    Well if you have playchess I dont mind doing live tutoring. If not you are next on the list after Dara.
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    Game 2647620


    [Event "Challenge"]
    [Site "http://www.chessatwork.com"]
    [White "DoctorDara"]
    [Black "danielletx"]
    [Result "1-0"]

    1. d4 Nf6
    2. e3 Nc6


    Again im not a fan of e3.....id only play this after getting the dark square bishop outside the pawn chain.

    3. Nf3 d5
    4. Nc3 Bg4


    If you want to play Nc3 its best to play 1.e4 🙂

    5. h3 Bxf3
    6. gxf3 Qd6


    You should always try to keep the pawns that will protect your king in good protecting order, this means not letting them get doubled. Qxf3 is much more natural than gxf3.

    7. e4 dxe4

    e4......gosh im not sure if I love this move or hate it 🙂 Its certainly aggressive in a way but maybe unsoundly so. Probably a move you could get away with playing real time chess but not so much correspondence chess. Intresting anyway 🙂


    8. fxe4 Nxd4

    Here you had to play d5, it displaces the black knight and saves the pawn. After the knight moves, probably Ne5 then white can capture the e pawn and not have to worry about the d pawn falling.

    9. f3 Qg3+

    f3....you should be careful about exposing your king to attack, it needs all the protection it can get. Basicly think of you king as a big fat pawn hugger, he loves those pawns, he needs them clooooosee.

    10. Kd2 Qxf3

    Black misses 0-0-0 here which just looks like a world of pain for white.

    11. Qxf3 Nxf3+
    12. Ke3 Ne1
    13. Bb5+ Nd7


    This is good, cha ching die Mr Knight. Black should have played c6 but then white would just play Bxc6 bxc6 and snap up the knight anyway.

    14. Rxe1 O-O-O

    Free knight, yummy.

    15. a4 Nc5

    a4 again....again not sure why, its not really good or bad, it just is.

    16. Ke2 Rd4

    Ke2 I like it, get that bishop active.

    17. Be3 e5

    Good move.

    18. Rad1 Rxd1

    Hm while the game move isnt bad id probably just take the rook here with Bxd4. If I was looking for a reason not to take the rook id say that after Bxd4 exd4 the white knight might be misplaced since it cant go to d5 because c6 would fork the bishop and knight.


    19. Rxd1 Be7
    20. Rd5 b6


    From here till the end looks mwaaammy and woo (great and good) 🙂

    21. Rxe5 Nd7
    22. Rxe7 Nc5
    23. Rxf7 g5
    24. Bxc5 bxc5
    25. Nd5 h5
    26. Ne3 g4
    27. hxg4 h4
    28. Re7 h3
    29. e5 h2
    30. Bc6 h1=Q
    31. Bxh1 Rxh1
    32. e6 Rc1
    33. Re8+ Kb7
    34. e7 Ra1
    35. Rd8 Rxa4
    36. e8=Q c4
    37. Qxa4 c3
    38. bxc3 c5
    39. Rd6 a5
    40. Qxa5 c4
    41. Nxc4 Kb8
    42. Qb6+ Kc8
    43. Rd8# 1-0
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  6. Standard memberDragon Fire
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    13 Nov '06 23:47
    Originally posted by Bedlam
    Game 2647620


    [b][Event "Challenge"]
    [Site "http://www.chessatwork.com"]
    [White "DoctorDara"]
    [Black "danielletx"]
    [Result "1-0"]

    1. d4 Nf6
    2. e3 Nc6


    Again im not a fan of e3.....id only play this after getting the dark square bishop outside the pawn chain.

    3. Nf3 d5
    4. Nc3 Bg4


    [i]If you want to play Nc3 its b ...[text shortened]... 8. bxc3 c5
    39. Rd6 a5
    40. Qxa5 c4
    41. Nxc4 Kb8
    42. Qb6+ Kc8
    43. Rd8# 1-0[/b][/b]
    I like your analysis and comments. Well done.
  7. Standard memberHomerJSimpson
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    13 Nov '06 23:591 edit
    Game 1900840

    Game 1975086

    You think I missed a win here?

    Game 1900843

    Thanks bedlam
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    Game 2702280
    Game 2717655
    Game 2726990
    Game 2740081
    Game 2748433

    Recent games I didn't win. I'll be happy to be your student 🙂

    Also I just registered on Playchess and I might even subscribe. It would be nice having an one on one session on MSN if you have it Bedlam.
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  10. Standard memberHomerJSimpson
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    14 Nov '06 00:03
    Nice thread Bedlam
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    14 Nov '06 00:37
    Wow... this is fast becoming an attractive feature here on RHP. And I like the way you comment on these games, Bedlam. It is like having an OTB post mortem, really. This time I'll really be following the game and comments. I'm sure I still have a lot to learn. My compliments for a job well done!
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    Waves hand, have game free now. :-)
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    14 Nov '06 09:52
    Originally posted by MoneyMaker7
    Game 2702280
    Game 2717655
    Game 2726990
    Game 2740081
    Game 2748433

    Recent games I didn't win. I'll be happy to be your student 🙂

    Also I just registered on Playchess and I might even subscribe. It would be nice having an one on one session on MSN if you have it Bedlam.
    Well my id there is "Naked Jammy Tart" so just come and prod me sometime, I totally love analysis so always welcome to run over games/openings/endings etc 🙂 Playchess is a real time chess server, you can chat on the analysis tables so its like having MSN on a chessboard.......makes the transfer of ideas much quicker 🙂
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    [Site "http://www.chessatwork.com"]
    [White "Ergot"]
    [Black "DoctorDara"]
    [Result "1-0"]


    1. e4 e5
    2. Nf3 d6


    d6 is certainly playable here but its not a move I like, id much prefer getting the bishop out. The merits for d6 is that its solid, the down side is that it will cramp your position.

    3. Bc4 Nf6
    4. Nc3 g6


    g6 is quite dodgy for the reasons seen in the game, better was Bg4 pinning the white knight to the queen. After that as black id follow up with Be7, Nc6 and 0-0. At least its soild if not much fun 🙂

    5. Ng5 Bh6

    Ng5 argh. Blacks in a bit of trouble now...I think the only way to get out of this in one piece is d5 sacrificing a pawn white has a few options here, we will look at the two captures probably best is 6. exd5 after which black plays h6 to kick the pesky g5 knight away after 7.Nf3 black could try e5 which looks good fun so white would probably play 7.Nge4 and as black id probably be thinking about Bg7 0-0 and then c6 depending on what white did. On move 6 white can play Bxd5, this doesnt look as good as exd5 for a few reasons, firstly the pawn cramped blacks position and secondly whites knight can take the bishop which he probably should. 6.Bxd5 Nxd5 with this the black queen opens up on the uncovered knight on g5. Looking at it I guess white has little choice but to take in the center with 7.Nxd5 here it looks like black has two choices c6 or taking the knight both look like they get some comlications. After 7..c6 8.Qf3 threatening mate on f2 so 8..f5 is the only move, then white can play the tricky 9.Qg3 cxd5 10.Qxe5+ Qe7 11.Qxh8 Qxg5...messy not sure whos better in this position but it looks fun. 7..Qxg5 taking the knight, also looks messy after 8.Nxc7+ Kd8 9.Nxa1 Qxg2 10.Rf1 Bh3....looking at the position I much prefer black here. Whites only defence is Qe2 protecting the rook on f2 then instead of just grabbing on f1 straight away black can try Nc6 threatening Nd4 which would just end white on the spot, always give your opponents the chance to go wrong 🙂 This is probably why its just so much wiser for white to take with the pawn on move 6

    6. Nxf7 Bg4

    Dont much like Bg4. Just Qe7 moving the queen out of the way of the knight seems much safer.

    7. f3 d5

    d5......black is daring white to take the queen......

    8. Nxd8 Kxd8

    And he/she does.......😲

    9. Nxd5 Rf8

    Instead of Rf8 the simple resign would have been ok 🙂 The game is lost beyond saving here so analysis of it wont help much.

    10. Nxf6 Rxf6
    11. fxg4 Rf4
    12. d3 Nc6
    13. Bxf4 exf4
    14. Qf3 Nd4
    15. Qf2 Bg7
    16. O-O-O h5
    17. gxh5 gxh5
    18. Qh4+ Kd7
    19. Qxh5 Rf8
    20. Qg4+ Rf5
    21. Qxg7+ Kd6
    22. Qxd4+ Rd5
    23. Qxd5+ 1-0
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    14 Nov '06 12:13
    Game 2686009

    [Site "http://www.chessatwork.com"]
    [White "spiritmangr8ness"]
    [Black "DoctorDara"]
    [Result "1-0"]

    1. e4 e5
    2. Nf3 Nf6
    3. d3 d5


    d5....wooooo I like it.

    4. Bg5 Bb4+

    Like it again

    5. c3 dxe4
    6. Bxf6 Qxf6
    7. dxe4 Be7


    Nothing wrong with Be7 but id put it on c5.....seems more aggressive

    8. Bb5+ Bd7
    9. Bc4 b5


    Gosh! b5...kinky. White probably needs clean underwear, you're certainly not letting yourself get pushed around in this games.

    10. Bd5 c6
    11. Bb3 Qd6


    Qd6 might be slightly inaccurate, Id much prefer continuing with development either 0-0 or Na6 aiming for Nc5. Moving the queen twice without gaining something isnt a good policy.

    12. Nbd2 O-O
    13. O-O Na6
    14. Bc2 b4


    b4 well its clear you've set out with a much more active approach in this game, trouble with b4 here is it allows Nc4 hitting the queen and the e5 pawn. After the queen moves the pawn will be toast.

    15. Qe2 c5
    16. Nc4 Qe6


    After Nc4 the best move is Bb5 pinning the knight to whites queen so after Nxd6 Bxe2 looks pretty good for black.

    17. Ncxe5 bxc3

    bxc3 is a mistake....white can then play Bb3 hitting the queen. The trouble is that the black queen is tied down to the defence of the bishop on d7 after 18.Bb3 Qd6 19.Rd1 is just game over.


    18. bxc3 Bf6

    Maybe Be8 here, its not a nice move but keeps black alive.

    19. Bb3 Qd6
    20. Rad1 Bg4


    Probably best moving the queen. The rest of the game is a downhill slope. I will point out that when you are behind in material you should avoid trading, since the simpler the game gets the easier it is for the winning side to win, keep the pieces on the board keep the game complex, keep them fighting. In this game you started off very well indeed, just seemed to lose it a little as the game went on.

    21. Rxd6 Be6
    22. Bxe6 fxe6
    23. Qxa6 Bxe5
    24. Rxe6 Bxc3
    25. Re7 g6
    26. Qc4+ Kh8
    27. Qxc3+ Kg8
    28. Qg7# 1-0
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