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Originally posted by Grampy Bobby
* = three.
Why swim in rip tides?
You'd be an asterisk it.
Stay within your depth.



Note: Pablum version
for my almost friend.

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Hush, don't speak of love,
It's wildly improbable,
and he shuts the door.

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Indifference leaps.
Carmine, glutinous knives leap.
Thirst torments midnight.

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Originally posted by Grampy Bobby
Why swim in rip tides?
You'd be an asterisk it.
Stay within your depth.
always go fer broke,
damn tha mines, full speed ahead,
the BRIG fer naysayers...

rookie

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Originally posted by Hand of Hecate
Refreshing swim. Relax.
Wait, what's that...? Yellow pool tinge!
Who let GB in?
That's six seven five.
If counting skills are not great
Use of fingers make.

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Originally posted by Gatecrasher
That's [b]six seven five.
If counting skills are not great
Use of fingers make.[/b]
(Relax is one syllable - r'lax.)

Refreshed after swim.
Wait, what's that...? Yellow pool tinge!
Who let GB in?

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Originally posted by Sunburnt
Hush, don't speak of love,
It's wildly improbable,
and he shuts the door.
Love is subjective.
Better to lower standards.
Porn is much cheaper.

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Wipe, dispose and flush.
Vile suppurations awash.
God as septic tank.

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Abuse victims suck
up pain. Bloated with hatred:
forget compassion.

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Fast, cheap, and yummy.
Tummy full of MSG.
Thanks, trusty ramen.

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Now she says clichés
will not find harbor with her
still she reads my poems.

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HAI GUYZ!~ LOLOLO!
All your web belong to us...
Set you up the bomb!~

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Occasional squirms -
fun for the whole family;
squid make superb pets

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Subwoofer gives ass
to the bass filling the room
even Bread can rock!

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Last one needed a semi-
colon; so I'll be certain
to include one here.