Haiku

Fall we'll be here soon.
Trees are dripping thier foliage.
It's a special time

haiku peace, sucks warts...
time for ultimate haiku...
no gouging!!! begin...


rookie

Question is... is there
a question. Question is why
silence someone's song?

Haiku pwn master
I'm deeper than a shallow pool
I must not succumb

Constraint unravels
Behind the dark veil of night.
The cage has opened.

Betwixt cricket's wings
whirls more than chirping, much more
than silence can sing.

Correct Haiku has a certain number of lines
and a specific number of syllables each line
and an interesting meaning when taken as a whole
thus, this is not an Haiku verse

Want restraint, passive
aggressive, understatement?
No. Graffitti rocks!

Underwhelming as
skim milk, kissing your sister,
same ole knee-jerk posts.

Originally posted by coquette
Correct Haiku has a certain number of lines
and a specific number of syllables each line
and an interesting meaning when taken as a whole
thus, this is not an Haiku verse

Originally posted by FreakyKBH
Only use an 'n'
following the letter 'a'
for the silent 'h.'

I am so clever
counting sounds on my fingers.
Here's another one!

OK, apparently I've stunk up this thread for Sunburnt. As a result I propose a competition. Max 5 entries per topic on a first come first serve judgement basis. Sunburnt judges the winner.

The first topic is: Strippers

Sensual vixen.
Graceful. Lithe. Polish that brass.
Sunburnt works the pole.


See how I did that? Pulled you in with simple imagery and in the second line forced you into visualizing a nubile young thing working the pole. The final line hits you with an unexpected twist that forces you to transpose Sunburnt onto the previous image. You're left with the question of why Sunburnt works as a stripper. Is there something sensual and sexy behind that freckled veil or is she just working it to support a $200/day coke habit. We may never know.

Originally posted by Hand of Hecate
OK, apparently I've stunk up this thread for Sunburnt. As a result I propose a competition. Max 5 entries per topic on a first come first serve judgement basis. Sunburnt judges the winner.

The first topic is: [b]Strippers

Sensual vixen.
Graceful. Lithe. Polish that brass.
Sunburnt works the pole.


See how I did that? Pu ...[text shortened]... freckled veil or is she just working it to support a $200/day coke habit. We may never know.[/b]

Originally posted by Sunburnt
You are disturbed but I suppose I'll give you points for your attempt at "fixing!"

Good thing nobody takes you seriously.

Originally posted by Hand of Hecate
See how I did that? Pulled you in with simple imagery and in the second line forced you into visualizing a nubile you thing working the pole. The final line hits you with an unexpected twist that forces you to transpose Sunburnt onto the previous image. You're left with the question of why Sunburnt works as a stripper. Is there something sensual a ...[text shortened]... t freckled veil or is she just working it to support a $200/day coke habit. We may never know.