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Originally posted by Nordlys
Normal is boring.
Not that I care a great deal
For banana farts.
A banana fart
is where is starts. "Not normal?"
I hear you saying.

But that is the point you see
Off beat and rather smelly

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Originally posted by rhb
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combining haiku
and "found poetry" is quite
clever, rhb


😏

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Originally posted by reader1107
now banana TARTS
would be ok for haiku
but not Earl Grey tea

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Earl Grey tea? Ploo argh!
Not for me: the bergamot
tastes like a po-porri

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Originally posted by LanndonKane
you're first line is wrong
"poem" is two syllables
your haiku has failed
It can be pronounced
either with one syllable
Or with two. (It's 'your'.)

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Originally posted by orangutan
Earl Grey tea? Ploo argh!
Not for me: the bergamot
tastes like a po-porri
It tastes like soap, eek!
Earl Grey tea is for losers.
Have a Darjeeling!

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Originally posted by LanndonKane
you're first line is wrong
"poem" is two syllables
your haiku has failed
You just read it wrong.
Po-em or pOm are both right.
Straighten out your facts.

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Originally posted by Phlabibit
You just read it wrong.
Po-em or pOm are both right.
Straighten out your fact.
Phlabibit is right
but why is there a cello
behind his back now?

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Originally posted by reader1107
Phlabibit is right
but why is there a cello
behind his back now?
He took my cello???
(Looking around in panic)
No, it is still here!

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Originally posted by Nordlys
It tastes like soap, eek!
Earl Grey tea is for losers.
Have a Darjeeling!
Cheers - much, much better
Than that nasty flowery stuff!
Tho' beer is good too.

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Originally posted by Nordlys
He took my cello???
(Looking around in panic)
No, it is still here!
I was excited!
I had turned to look about...
There's no cello here.

🙁

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Originally posted by Phlabibit
You just read it wrong.
Po-em or pOm are both right.
Straighten out your facts.
Thanks for helping out!
Maybe I'll add you some day
To my buddy list.

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Originally posted by Nordlys
He took my cello???
(Looking around in panic)
No, it is still here!
What did reader see?
Phlabibits looking guilty -
There's something fishy!

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Originally posted by orangutan
What did reader see?
Phlabibits looking guilty -
There's something fishy!
Faith Whales! That was it!
Really! I didn't see a
cello! No, not me!

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Originally posted by reader1107
Faith Whales! That was it!
Really! I didn't see a
cello! No, not me!
Ok - move on, move on
Nothing to see here. Move on.
(Sorry Phlabibit)

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