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Originally posted by Wulebgr
Quarterback Monday mornin'
always makes the play
The defense is hung over.
You misunderstood.
It's five - seven - five, and not
Seven - five - seven.

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Originally posted by Nordlys
Thanks for the advice.
However, it is too late.
I'm baking them now.

Should have used a recipe,
That might have helped a little.
Well don't look to me -
You can not call me a cook
Mmm - they smell nice though

I think they be fine - tasty
I reckon - I'm drooling now

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Originally posted by orangutan
Well don't look to me -
You can not call me a c[b]ook

Mmm - they smell nice though

I think they be fine - tasty
I reckon - I'm drooling now[/b]
They are almost done.
I will send one over soon.
Would you like butter?

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Originally posted by Nordlys
They are almost done.
I will send one over soon.
Would you like butter?
Mmmm, smells delicious -
and jam if you have got some?
Is there any tea?

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Originally posted by Nordlys
You misunderstood.
It's five - seven - five, and not
Seven - five - seven.
rules disintegrate
rumbling football blazes, bleeding
Monday morn's leech

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Originally posted by Wulebgr
rules disintegrate
rumbling football blazes, bleeding
Monday morn's leech
That is five, eight, four
not five, seven then five mate
You've got the count wrong!

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Originally posted by orangutan
Mmmm, smells delicious -
and jam if you have got some?
Is there any tea?
Not sure about jam
(I rarely eat it myself).
I will make some tea.

Edit: They taste really good!
Should have used more cardamom.

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Who am I to nag
About getting a count right ?
I apologise

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Originally posted by Nordlys
Not sure about jam
(I rarely eat it myself).
I will make some tea.

Edit: They taste really good!
Should have used more cardamom.
Ouch - they are hot still
But smells like I'm in heaven
- no - they are just right! 🙂

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Originally posted by orangutan
Ouch - they are hot still
But smells like I'm in heaven
- no - they are just right! 🙂
Found some jam for you!
It's from my last visitors
(Sister and nephews).

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Originally posted by Wulebgr
rules disintegrate
rumbling football blazes, bleeding
Monday morn's leech
You are getting there!
Just practise a little more
For superhaikus.

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Originally posted by Nordlys
Found some jam for you!
It's from my last visitors
(Sister and nephews).
Wow - this is right nice,
buns, jam, tea - well it's perfect
I'm so glad I came

😏

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Originally posted by orangutan
Wow - this is right nice,
buns, jam, tea - well it's perfect
I'm so glad I came

😏
You are quite welcome.
I hope you like licorice tea?
Glad you like the buns.

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Originally posted by Nordlys
You are quite welcome.
I hope you like licorice tea?
Glad you like the buns.
Licorice tea - cool.
So much better than earl grey!
But everything is

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Originally posted by Nordlys
You are getting there!
Just practise a little more
For superhaikus.
limited genre
misses a real tradition
Basho counted not

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