Haiku

A tea haiku -- an
invitation of sorts to
Nordie! Wake up, girl!!!!!


Earl Grey, Darjeeling,
Constant Comment, Chai, green, black --
Let me pour a cup!

Originally posted by reader1107
A tea haiku -- an
invitation of sorts to
Nordie! Wake up, girl!!!!!


Earl Grey, Darjeeling,
Constant Comment, Chai, green, black --
Let me pour a cup!

Sunstruck day
Struggling darkness fade
Vanishing

Originally posted by orangutan
Does the robot sleep?
dreaming of tea cups no doubt
Earl Grey - A nightmare

Cooling air
Red heaven surface
Waterfloor

Morninghaze rising
Ascending dreams wake

Rebel dream
Strong and unyielding
Fighting time

New generation
Dream but fading lies

I must say
I prefer tanka
to haiku

It allows an end
Or I'd have to use...


...five seven five and that wouldn't work for me at all since I tend to write too much if I get the space, so this format is good for me as it helps me stay true to the core essence of my thoughts.

Hello friends
Have I any friends?
No one here

It's lonely in space
Major Tom has died

Originally posted by stocken
Hello friends
Have I any friends?
No one here

It's lonely in space
Major Tom has died

Originally posted by orangutan
Spectator
Somewhere. Not sure where.
not writing

Originally posted by stocken
Freak am I
Observed from a far
Floating here

Space is vast and dark
weakened starlight late

Deception
Self preservation
Natural

Weaker flowers bow
Tree seek heavens high

Originally posted by orangutan
Work watches ...
Wasting worker. Why?
Who waits? Where?

Haiku? Hai!
Haiku? haiku!? Hai!
Haiku? Hai!

Originally posted by stocken
Illusion
Work long forgotten
No one here

😛