Haiku

Originally posted by orangutan
Your avatar is
very clever. Based on the
'referrer' header?

Profile is
static, but forum
keeps changing

Can not see
it direct either.
I like it

Originally posted by Daemon Sin
haiku is
two syllables chimp
please, rewrite

Originally posted by stocken
Tanka, eh?
Care to define it?
I am lost

😕

Originally posted by orangutan
well - five, seven, five
then two more lines - each seven
that follow after

This makes a tanka. Though the
short form might be just five five?

Originally posted by Nordlys
Tanka - like haiku,
5 - 7 - 5. Then you add
Two lines with 7.

Originally posted by orangutan
told him already
I think has it right now
The monkey learns fast.

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Can't decide
5,7,5 or
3,5,3 ?

Originally posted by Nordlys
Yes, I was too slow. :'(
But a chimpanzee is not
A monkey. An ape!

Originally posted by Nordlys
Yes, I was too slow. :'(
But a chimpanzee is not
A monkey. An ape!

Originally posted by stocken
Ape, monkey
Same difference really
though it's not

I think what I mean
I mean what I think

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Originally posted by orangutan
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Originally posted by EAPOE
I took the blue pill.
Then everything went very dark.
Thrown out of this world

Shocked to find there
Was no games of chess to play
and some bills to pay

Matrix rebooted
Back in the red hot world now
With chess games Hooray!

Outage today pffffft
I couldn't make my chess moves.
Crap crap crap crap pfffffft

last night i went out
i played a gig in london
prince harry was there

Originally posted by Officer Dibble
last night i went out
i played a gig in london
prince harry was there