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In your own words (poem)

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Originally posted by Nordlys
forgocken
It was a Haittu.

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Originally posted by Starrman
It was a Haittu.
But it almost rhymed.
I don't like things almost done,
Failing the last test.

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Originally posted by abigailrose
The Beach House

So many summers left stained
at the edge of that kitchen knife.
Mother; or a figure that cast a
motherly shadow
standing placid at the bank
of an elongated silver sink tub.
Her watered-down self-
in control-
reflects a woman
stained upon that house.

And we, like school fish,
swimming in her would-be dishwater,
rest waist ...[text shortened]... beneath the warm sky,
not daring to breathe
for fear of losing the ability.

-Abigail Rose
Remarkable poem. 🙂

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Originally posted by Sunburnt
Remarkable poem. 🙂
thank you
i actually really enjoy writing poetry

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Originally posted by Sunburnt
I thought you were SWAMPED at work? You are so full of BLEEP! 😛
No, no, no, you don't understand. It's because I'm swamped with work
that I spend time here, getting all the more swamped. How can any
sane man stay away from a place where beautiful people such as yourself
hang out? 😉😀

That would be madness!

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Originally posted by abigailrose
The Beach House

So many summers left stained
at the edge of that kitchen knife.
Mother; or a figure that cast a
motherly shadow
standing placid at the bank
of an elongated silver sink tub.
Her watered-down self-
in control-
reflects a woman
stained upon that house.

And we, like school fish,
swimming in her would-be dishwater,
rest waist ...[text shortened]... beneath the warm sky,
not daring to breathe
for fear of losing the ability.

-Abigail Rose
This is strong and intrusive. seamy and beautiful. If my ego wasn't the size
it is, I'd be seriously disturbed at the competition. 🙂

Please don't stop writing.

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When I am lonely

I draw a box

and climb into hide.