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...to rock a rhyme that's right on time, it's tricky.

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You know it, poet.
Word!!

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Originally posted by yo its me
You know it, poet.
Word!!
"Frederick, you are a poet!" - "I know it!"

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Originally posted by st00p1dfac3
...to rock a rhyme that's right on time, it's tricky.
Not often I click a thread and actually see what I expected.

Well done, and it IS tricky... that's a fact!

P-

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Originally posted by st00p1dfac3
...to rock a rhyme that's right on time, it's tricky.
This heartfelt "rock a rhyme right on time" is dedicated to those

interludes when the RHP General Forum is having a bad hair day...





... an experiment in excrement.




Thank you, st00p, for letting me write on your wall.



"""'
😀

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please to tell us, if you're jealous

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Rock-a-bye baby
on the tree top,

when the wind blows
the cradle will rock,
when the bough breaks
the cradle will fall,
down will come baby,
cradle and all.

WTF? You can rock to that rhythm..... but at the top of a tree? Who the freak wrote that? Baby tumbling from the top of a tree? Psycho! 😠

(Michael Jackson? - may be it was hotel balcony! 😛)

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Originally posted by st00p1dfac3
...to rock a rhyme that's right on time, it's tricky.
Mr. st00p, here's 'rock a rhyme right on time' #2. Simple title is "Please"




Zero Draft: F THIS & F'N THAT... couldn't we just chat?


1st Revision: F THIS & F'N THAT... couldn't we just chat.


2nd Revision: F THIS & F'N THAT... couldn't we just chat!


Galley Proof: F THIS & F'N THAT... couldn't we just chat!!!




🙂

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Originally posted by st00p1dfac3
...to rock a rhyme that's right on time, it's tricky.
#'s 3-5...



Hate or love it. Rise above it.

Old. Old. Do as you're told.

Young, young. Bite your tongue.



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# 6-7



Some can forgive. Some cannot.

Less about feeling than thought.

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I really like my favourite orange,
It always...uh...I like the way it...um...dang!

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Originally posted by mrjonesvich321
I really like my favourite orange,
It always...uh...I like the way it...um...dang!
Knocked on the butt,
by a door on a door hing.

Couldn't help notice,
it was painted orange!

Word.

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Originally posted by st00p1dfac3
...to rock a rhyme that's right on time, it's tricky.
Candy is dandy but liquor is quicker.


-Ogden Nash

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Originally posted by Grampy Bobby
Candy is dandy but liquor is quicker.


-Ogden Nash
wine is fine
but whiskey's quicker
suicide is slow
and thicker



--Ozzy Osbourne

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Originally posted by st00p1dfac3
...to rock a rhyme that's right on time, it's tricky.
tricky tricky trrrrricky!



sweet, I had totally forgotten run dmc.