It's tricky...

st00p1dfac3

General

10 May 08

st00p1dfac3

Joined: 26 Jul 06
Moves: 13610

10 May 08

...to rock a rhyme that's right on time, it's tricky.

yo its me

Yo! Its been

Me, all along

Joined: 14 Jan 07
Moves: 64339

10 May 08

You know it, poet.
Word!!

Nordlys

The sky

Joined: 05 Apr 05
Moves: 10385

10 May 08

Originally posted by yo its me
You know it, poet.
Word!!

"Frederick, you are a poet!" - "I know it!"

Phlabibit

Mystic Meg

tinyurl.com/3sbbwd4

Joined: 27 Mar 03
Moves: 17242

10 May 08

Originally posted by st00p1dfac3
...to rock a rhyme that's right on time, it's tricky.

Not often I click a thread and actually see what I expected.

Well done, and it IS tricky... that's a fact!

P-

Grampy Bobby

Boston Lad

USA

Joined: 14 Jul 07
Moves: 43012

10 May 08

Originally posted by st00p1dfac3
...to rock a rhyme that's right on time, it's tricky.

This heartfelt "rock a rhyme right on time" is dedicated to those

interludes when the RHP General Forum is having a bad hair day...

... an experiment in excrement.

Thank you, st00p, for letting me write on your wall.

"""'
😀

PinkFloyd

weedhopper

Joined: 25 Jul 07
Moves: 8096

11 May 08

please to tell us, if you're jealous

mikelom

Ajarn

Wat?

Joined: 16 Aug 05
Moves: 76863

11 May 08

Rock-a-bye baby
on the tree top,

when the wind blows
the cradle will rock,
when the bough breaks
the cradle will fall,
down will come baby,
cradle and all.

WTF? You can rock to that rhythm..... but at the top of a tree? Who the freak wrote that? Baby tumbling from the top of a tree? Psycho! 😠

(Michael Jackson? - may be it was hotel balcony! 😛)

Grampy Bobby

Boston Lad

USA

Joined: 14 Jul 07
Moves: 43012

11 May 08

1 edit

Originally posted by st00p1dfac3
...to rock a rhyme that's right on time, it's tricky.

Mr. st00p, here's 'rock a rhyme right on time' #2. Simple title is "Please"

Zero Draft: F THIS & F'N THAT... couldn't we just chat?

1st Revision: F THIS & F'N THAT... couldn't we just chat.

2nd Revision: F THIS & F'N THAT... couldn't we just chat!

Galley Proof: F THIS & F'N THAT... couldn't we just chat!!!

🙂

Grampy Bobby

Boston Lad

USA

Joined: 14 Jul 07
Moves: 43012

11 May 08

1 edit

Originally posted by st00p1dfac3
...to rock a rhyme that's right on time, it's tricky.

#'s 3-5...

Hate or love it. Rise above it.

Old. Old. Do as you're told.

Young, young. Bite your tongue.

😀

Grampy Bobby

Boston Lad

USA

Joined: 14 Jul 07
Moves: 43012

11 May 08

1 edit

# 6-7

Some can forgive. Some cannot.

Less about feeling than thought.

mrjonesvich321

Richmond Hill

Joined: 20 Dec 06
Moves: 4037

12 May 08

I really like my favourite orange,
It always...uh...I like the way it...um...dang!

Phlabibit

Mystic Meg

tinyurl.com/3sbbwd4

Joined: 27 Mar 03
Moves: 17242

12 May 08

Originally posted by mrjonesvich321
I really like my favourite orange,
It always...uh...I like the way it...um...dang!

Knocked on the butt,
by a door on a door hing.

Couldn't help notice,
it was painted orange!

Word.

P-

Grampy Bobby

Boston Lad

USA

Joined: 14 Jul 07
Moves: 43012

12 May 08

Originally posted by st00p1dfac3
...to rock a rhyme that's right on time, it's tricky.

Candy is dandy but liquor is quicker.

-Ogden Nash

duecer

anybody seen my

underpants??

Joined: 01 Sep 06
Moves: 56453

12 May 08

Originally posted by Grampy Bobby
Candy is dandy but liquor is quicker.

-Ogden Nash

wine is fine
but whiskey's quicker
suicide is slow
and thicker

--Ozzy Osbourne

wormwood

If Theres Hell Below

We're All Gonna Go!

Joined: 10 Sep 05
Moves: 10228

12 May 08

1 edit

Originally posted by st00p1dfac3
...to rock a rhyme that's right on time, it's tricky.

tricky tricky trrrrricky!

sweet, I had totally forgotten run dmc.