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He had the first inkling that his marriage was not going to last when he caught a glimpse of the wedding dress his fiancee was planning to wear.

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the world was blurry, he'd never seen it so - oily looking


Terry Busty was shivering as the ice cold wind blew her skirt and exposed her hidden secret,

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All of a sudden, he realized that it wasn't a matter of which one of the 13 parallel universes he was existing in; the confusion was being caused by the fact he was existing in seven of them simultaneously.


@torunn said
"From his table at the fashionable Metropol restaurant, Richard had a perfect view of people walking up and down the small street connected to Bayswater Road..."

I hoped this perhaps could be the beginning of a story that might continue a few lines. Just for fun. Anyone?
We could create a thread in the Philosophy club. This will ensure undisturbed working.

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@ponderable said
We could create a thread in the Philosophy club. This will ensure undisturbed working.
Good idea.


The day I was rather unceremoniously told that my sister was in fact my mother and my niece was in fact my sister and my grandmother's sister-in-law was in fact my aunt's 2nd cousin, I realized my credibility as a family counsellor was in peril.


@torunn said
From his table at the fashionable Metropol restaurant, Richard had a perfect view of people walking up and down the small street connected to Bayswater Road.
For a moment he was captivated by the purposeful walk of a young woman, dressed for a working lunch with a determined look and a smart tailored suit.

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@lemondrop said
Terry Busty was shivering as the ice cold wind blew her skirt and exposed her hidden secret,
Not a bad play on words lemon well done! 😉 😛

We both know who that was aimed at, I am sure a few others caught it too! 😉

-VR


Discussing of meta levels had never his can of beer, so he advanced with his standard course of action.

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@ponderable said
Discussing of meta levels had never his can of beer, so he advanced with his standard course of action.
“meta-conversations” ... The definition meta-conversation describes for example the situation, that two or more persons discuss the way a certain conversation developped, especially how they treated eachother in that conversation. Meta originally comes from Greek language and means “higher” or “above”.

I think you meant: Discussing of meta levels had never 'been' or 'was' his can of beer, so he advanced with his standard course of action. 😉

-VR


He waited under the clock, a bunch of red roses in his hand.

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He swiped right two dozen times and then waited for four days. Nothing happened and so he deleted the app. Then he tried looking up his teenage female classmates on facebook hoping to find that there were some who were divorced or at least unhappy.

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