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Originally posted by coquette
117. He's lost it, totally, thought Latitsia
188. She excused herself and went to "powder her nose". "Yes that's right, the penthouse but please don't buzz up just tell Noel what's going on and I'm sure he'll let you up with no problems. I'll try to keep him occupied till you arrive."

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189. L came out looking a little glassy-eyed and just a wee bit excited. "Oh Daddy, can I try just one more dark square? Please please please???" purrrrrr whimper cute eyes purrr

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Originally posted by coquette
189. L came out looking a little glassy-eyed and just a wee bit excited. "Oh Daddy, can I try just one more dark square? Please please please???" purrrrrr whimper cute eyes purrr
190. "Why of course "Tits" (his pet name for her when she was about 3). He had overheard her conversation and had forged a diabolical plan to "take care of the situation". Latitsia, thinking that daddy was completely oblivious to what was coming, bit into the chocolate. She thought to herself, "there's something different in the taste comparede to that offered previously and mentioned it to Doyle. He said " You have a very keen palate my dear. Yes that particular piece was very special. It came from a batch made by a company from the southern part of Switzerland called La Compagnie Chocolate de la Swiss. It stopped production after the second world war after it was discovered that the principals had given heavily to an organization with ties to the Peruvian independence cause ( a little known sidebar to the big picture in Europe)."

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191. L "tits" blinked in amazement. They stopped production! Impossible! this is scrumptious daddy. OMG.

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Originally posted by coquette
191. L "tits" blinked in amazement. They stopped production! Impossible! this is scrumptious daddy. OMG.
192. It was then that she realized that this was not a "production" but real life. OMGGM

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193. Daddy! You could takeover the entire marketplace of dark chocolate production! Don't you realize that?!!!

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194. "Already did that, Precious," answered the smug Doyle.

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Originally posted by coquette
194. "Already did that, Precious," answered the smug Doyle.
195. Latitsia thought to herself that maybe she shouldn't have made this contact after all. How was she to exricate herself from this situation? Would Doyle let her go considering all that she knew of his diabolical plans?

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Originally posted by Great Big Stees
195. Latitsia thought to herself that maybe she shouldn't have made this contact after all. How was she to exricate herself from this situation? Would Doyle let her go considering all that she knew of his diabolical plans?
196. She looked at her father and with a slight smile on her face and said, "Daddy dearest would you consider letting me help you with your next move?"

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197. Consider it? I thought she'd never ask! Why, I'd have to think about that L, afterall it's a very special move.

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Originally posted by coquette
197. Consider it? I thought she'd never ask! Why, I'd have to think about that L, afterall it's a very special move.
198. A move that Latitsia had planned since her father abandonned her and her mother low these 20 odd years. "Revenge shall be mine", she thought as she took yet another of the precious cubes of chocolate and put it in her mouth, letting her tongue savour it's delicious form.

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199. Having advanced on the dark squares now, L was ready to help with the next move. Her mother's advice was accurate. Doyle would be so wrapped up in himself and showing off his understanding of the depths of the combinations of the ways to make chocolates that he would let his guard down. All she would have to do to win all that she desired would be to pretend to be ecstatic about his little offerings of dark squares.

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200. What Sheila hadn't counted on, however, was the sudden appearance of a white knight. The doorbell rang unexpectedly. Doyle and L "tits" each looked at the other quizzically. Gee, who could that be?

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Originally posted by coquette
200. What Sheila hadn't counted on, however, was the sudden appearance of a white knight. The doorbell rang unexpectedly. Doyle and L "tits" each looked at the other quizzically. Gee, who could that be?
201. "Fritz... iwhat are you doing here?", he said, after his jaw rebounded off his chest. "Doyle, don't be so rude. Please introduce me to this gorgeous young lady". "Sorry Fritz I just couldn't believe...ah this is my daughter, Latitsia. Why are you here Fritz?"

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202. Fritz leered lasciviously long at Latitsia then turned back to the sheepishly nervous Doyle and said, because I understand that you have been using me in your diabolical plots. I don't recall getting the vig.

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