Haiku

Slap eagles five four
on the back: I think he's got
a rib caught in throat.

eagles five four is
choking on mc nabbs jersey
which no longer exists

Originally posted by YEAH BOY
eagles five four is
choking on mc nabbs jersey
which no longer exists

Football--- IMO---
is not an approved topic
for making haiku's.

New England weather,
does not settle on one mood,
today: new season.

Spring, summer, winter
changes like one swaps out clothes
today: Autumn coat.

Raindrops lift the dust
wet the rust, kiss the petals
by simply falling.

Pitter patter drop
Ceaseless Downpour forever
Cleansing my conscience

The whispering trees
Tell terrible tales of death
Darkness is fallling

The real sticky thread
Is moving back to the top.
No need to thank me.

I had forgotten
the immense pleasure derived
from counting my fing---

Haiku belongs here
Don't post in the other thread
On your mark, get set -

Do you brush your hair?
Gently pulling snarls away
In your pajamas...

Originally posted by Phlabibit
Do you brush your hair?
Gently pulling snarls away
In your pajamas...

Haiku can be tough,
especially when you can't edit yourself. It's one of those poem structures that you learn as a child and then ignore until you find yourself posting willy-nilly on an internet chess site, and then you think to yourself "wow, I guess this is what Ms. Adams was trying to teach us, that less is more, brevity is wit, the Japanese excel at making things smaller, etc...". It's really surprising that these thoughts don't come up more during day-tp-day activities, we could all save ourselves a lot of time and effort while managing to get out point across more elegantly and with more impact. Funny, isn't it?
Ms. Adams was hot.

Originally posted by PBE6
Here's more pillow talk:
Please exercise, but not tonight...
I have a headache.