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Red skin so red from the glare
Sensitive to touch
Rain, I miss so much

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Originally posted by rukus78
Red skin so red from the glare
Sensitive to touch
Rain, I miss so much
It's five syllables
then the next line has seven
get it right next time



😞

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When out pops the seeds
---in the spring of the gardens---
gardeners sneeze: "Haiku!"

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Freaky is back here
back from the land of the banned
welcome back my friend

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My sentence reduced
(for good behavior and all)
imagine that, huh!

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For good behavior?
now that doesn't sound like you
that sounds more like me. 😕

Edit: to add a word to 2nd line 😞

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You snuck another
one in before the day turned---
right before midnight!

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Originally posted by Ice Cold
For good behavior?
now that doesn't sound like you
that sounds more like me. 😕

Edit: to add a word to 2nd line 😞
Edit: to add or
take away from the first thought
or flush the whole thing.

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Went to post office.
I smell something good, but what?
Phil is invited to eat!~

The door says "private".
Remembers small girl and mom.
Sorry, no potty!

So there I am now.
Private area in back
Heaping the food... WOW!

Tummy is now full.
Plenty to share at office.
They're like me, amazed!

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Prose competition
So many good entries
Everyone should vote

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Not inspired to write
Have nothing to be saying
Will browse Chess forum

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How can I compete
against those with thesaurus-
like minds and me: not?

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black and white bubbles
pacing around tired students
standardized tests stink

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Originally posted by pawnhandler
black and white bubbles
pacing around tired students
standardized tests stink
Pop each bubble with
the lead of your pencil tip:
say they were all right.

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I still suck at prose.
Every year I try to to write,
Every year I fail.