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Originally posted by Peachy
So whats the deal here again..?
http://www.redhotpawn.com/board/showthread.php?threadid=42952&page=1

Write me a poem!

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Originally posted by royalchicken
http://www.redhotpawn.com/board/showthread.php?threadid=42952&page=1

Write me a poem!
Alrighty... but err... whats does SHAV mean..?

And I hope you weren't serious with that Whale Father business.

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Originally posted by Peachy
Alrighty... but err... whats does SHAV mean..?
Does "ixmir" ring a bell?

And I hope you weren't serious with that Whale Father business.

I hope he was. 😠

In Whaleship,
Sister Nordwhale

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Myxomatosis

Caught in the centre of a soundless field
While hot inexplicable hours go by
What trap is this? Where were its teeth concealed?
You seem to ask.
I make a sharp reply,

Then clean my stick. I'm glad I can't explain
Just in what jaws you were to suppurate:
You may have thought things would come right again
If you could only keep quite still and wait.

Philip Larkin, 1954

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Originally posted by Bowmann
[b]Myxomatosis[/b]
If I got that right, and there's no reason to think I did, it was strong and extremely upsetting to an animal friend (such as myself) fond of rabbits. Good poetry.

If I didn't get it, which is of course more likely given my intellect, it was confusing enough to actually stir up my feelings of sympathy for the little rabbit caught in the trap (which it wasn't about).

Edit: I think the trap is the disease. Am I right? Am I right? What do I get? 🙂

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Originally posted by stocken
If I got that right, and there's no reason to think I did, it was strong and extremely upsetting to an animal friend (such as myself) fond of rabbits. Good poetry.

If I didn't get it, which is of course more likely given my intellect, it was confusing enough to actually stir up my feelings of sympathy for the little rabbit caught in the trap (which ...[text shortened]... t about).

Edit: I think the trap is the disease. Am I right? Am I right? What do I get? 🙂
I usually don't understand poetry, and this is no exception, but myxomatosis is a rabbit disease.

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I like the Radiohead song better.

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Originally posted by stocken
Edit: I think the trap is the disease. Am I right? Am I right? What do I get? 🙂
A chocolate banana.

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Originally posted by Nordlys
I usually don't understand poetry, and this is no exception...
It's really not that difficult. I'm disappointed in you 🙁

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Originally posted by Bowmann
It's really not that difficult. I'm disappointed in you 🙁
Well, I didn't really try. Too much of an effort.

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Originally posted by Bowmann
A chocolate banana.
A banana.... Chocolate.... MMmmmmmmm... 😛

(That wasn't a rude afroamerican joke was it? 😠 )

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Originally posted by Nordlys
Well, I didn't really try. Too much of an effort.
So, you didn't understand it because you didn't try. Yes, that makes sense. I see that now.

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Originally posted by stocken
A banana.... Chocolate.... MMmmmmmmm... 😛

(That wasn't a rude afroamerican joke was it? 😠 )
This time you're over-analyzing.

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Originally posted by stocken
If I got that right, and there's no reason to think I did, it was strong and extremely upsetting to an animal friend (such as myself) fond of rabbits. Good poetry.

If I didn't get it, which is of course more likely given my intellect, it was confusing enough to actually stir up my feelings of sympathy for the little rabbit caught in the trap (which t about).

Edit: I think the trap is the disease. Am I right? Am I right? What do I get? 🙂
Caught in the centre of a soundless field
While hot inexplicable hours go by
What trap is this? Where were its teeth concealed?
You seem to ask.
I make a sharp reply,

Then clean my stick. I'm glad I can't explain
Just in what jaws you were to suppurate:
You may have thought things would come right again
If you could only keep quite still and wait.

Philip Larkin, 1954

No, it's about a guy who is in a relationship with a girl who talks too much while he's trying to get her to have sex! It's a 'soundless field' for him cause he can't get a word in as she yaks for hours on end, nor can he achieve his objective. He realizes he's 'caught in the trap' cause he needs her for sex. 😕

Heh, ok I just wanted to show how poetry can mean something different to everybody.