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Originally posted by Bowmann
This time you're over-analyzing.
Nae, I'm trying to be funny. 🙂

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Originally posted by arrakis
Heh, ok I just wanted to show how poetry can mean something different to everybody.
Erm, don't forget the title of the poem...

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Originally posted by arrakis
I just wanted to show how poetry can mean something different to everybody.
Which is why I like poetry. 🙂

How you interpret a specific poem at a specific time can tell you a lot about yourself. How you change over time and how you perceive things differently at different stages in life.

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Originally posted by stocken
Which is why I like poetry. 🙂

How you interpret a specific poem at a specific time can tell you a lot about yourself. How you change over time and how you perceive things differently at different stages in life.
So whats happening again with this thread... are we submitting some poem at some point...?

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Originally posted by stocken
Which is why I like poetry. 🙂

How you interpret a specific poem at a specific time can tell you a lot about yourself. How you change over time and how you perceive things differently at different stages in life.
Does that mean I'm horny?

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Originally posted by Bowmann
Erm, don't forget the title of the poem...
Yes, this particular poem was more clear than most. 🙂

Then again, he could have meant something other than to simply dipict the rabbit caught in the disease. He could have meant for instance, how when faced with the hardships of life one should not simply give up and wait for rescue, or things can end as unfortunate as for the little ill rabbit.

Yea, I know, that's lame. But it's possible. 😕

(And I was talking about Philip here, of course. Not Arrakis.)

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Originally posted by arrakis
Does that mean I'm horny?
Only you can answer that, but I'd say the chances are good that you are. Or rather, it's good for you if you are. That is, if you can find a love-vessle to release in*.

Dr. Booth has spoken.

* Although, there is nothing shameful with self-gratification, should you lack the desired company.

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Originally posted by Peachy
So whats happening again with this thread... are we submitting some poem at some point...?
Sure, why not? Where?

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Originally posted by stocken
Sure, why not? Where?
Am too lazy to go through this thread...

Was hoping someone can shed some light for me..

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Originally posted by stocken
Then again, he could have meant something other than to simply dipict the rabbit caught in the disease...
Metaphor is one thing. Larkin is quite another.


Edit: No chocolate banana after all.

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Originally posted by Bowmann
So, you didn't understand it because you didn't try. Yes, that makes sense. I see that now.
Well, I read the poem. Most texts make sense (at least some sense) the first time I read them. This one didn't. I didn't make the extra effort to read it several times.

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Originally posted by Bowmann
No chocolate banana after all.
:'(

I haven't actually read any Larkin. Mostly swedish poems (easier to digest in my own native language). So, why is it that Larkin doesn't use metaphore's in his poetry? No, wait. I'll google on it. 🙂

Couldn't I have at least half the chocolate banana for getting at least part of it right?

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Originally posted by Nordlys
Most texts make sense the first time I read them. This one didn't.
Try this one, then. It's a doddle:


Dry-Point

Endlessly, time-honoured irritant,
A bubble is restively forming at your tip.
Burst it as fast as we can -
It will grow again, until we begin dying.

Silently it inflates, till we're enclosed
And forced to start the struggle to get out:
Bestial, intent, real.
The wet spark comes, the bright blown walls collapse,

But what sad scapes we cannot turn from then:
What ashen hills! what salted, shrunken lakes!
How leaden the ring looks,
Birmingham magic all discredited,

And how remote that bare and sunscrubbed room,
Intensely far, that padlocked cube of light
We neither define nor prove,
Where you, we dream, obtain no right of entry.

Philip Larkin, 1950

😉

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Originally posted by stocken
So, why is it that Larkin doesn't use metaphore's in his poetry?
I never said he didn't [use metaphor(s)].

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Originally posted by Bowmann
[b]Myxomatosis

Caught in the centre of a soundless field
While hot inexplicable hours go by
What trap is this? Where were its teeth concealed?
You seem to ask.
I make a sharp reply,

Then clean my stick. I'm glad I can't explain
Just in what jaws you were to suppurate:
You may have thought things would come right again
If you could only keep quite still and wait.

Philip Larkin, 1954[/b]
The hunter waits patiently in the hot woods and hours go by until the prey is caught in the trap. The hunter doesn't notice at first but the animal's cry of pain through the forest's silence grabs the hunter's attention.

The hunter looks at the animal and seems to get the impression that the animal is wondering in shock as how it slipped out of concentration and fell in such a trap. The hunter replies swiftly by ending the animal's life.

While the hunter is cleaning his killing tool, he ponders about the animal's last thoughts. He sinisterly blames the animal for its death as it uttered these cries and made this sorry situation known to the hunter.

Myxomatosis; is when the Zionists blame the Palestinians for the rabbit's death.