If you don't mind me dropping in on this impromptu poetry jam session I have something to share.
Exit Only
It says exit only,
It's only for poo,
If you try anything,
I will mutilate you.
It's completely un-natural,
It doesn't create kids,
So why even do it?
I've heard it's a pain in the rear.
I'm here all week.
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Originally posted by RagnorakReview
I gave a listen to the recommended band, and I read some of this thread, and I wrote a poem, which I dedicate to Boris. Do you think if I asked nicely, Dragon'sPerm would put it to "music"?
[b]A Hole
Once A hole,
Always A hole,
until filled with stool,
then an A Hole.
D[/b]
This is a very good poem. It is as good a poem as any other poem written by this poet. Perhaps better. It is tight and technically very good. I like this poem. The best thing about it? Probably it's tightness. Or maybe its technical-ness. All in all, a good poem. Read this poem!!!
Note: this review was written by someone who KNOWS about swords-and-sorcery death metal poetry. Treat it as gospel.
Originally posted by dottewellA fair review, if ever I saw one.
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This is a very good poem. It is as good a poem as any other poem written by this poet. Perhaps better. It is tight and technically very good. I like this poem. The best thing about it? Probably it's tightness. Or maybe its technical-ness. All in all, a good poem. Read this poem!!!
Note: this review was written by someone who KNOWS about swords-and-sorcery death metal poetry. Treat it as gospel.
I think Colours is technically better though.
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