Originally posted by SJ247The last thing I sold was 10 years ago. I haven't made anything for a long time. But in any case textile design (my feild) is very different to Natsias.
Do you have any work available for public consumption?
I wish her all the luck, really I do.
That is the last time I will offer her my concidered opinion though 🙁
Originally posted by yo its mefield.
The last thing I sold was 10 years ago. I haven't made anything for a long time. But in any case textile design (my feild) is very different to Natsias.
I wish her all the luck, really I do.
That is the last time I will offer her my concidered opinion though 🙁
considered. 😏
Never start a sentence with 'But'.
Natsia's. 😉
Originally posted by adam warlockThe 'but' you started with took away all the stress! If you re-write the sentence without the 'but', and restructure it, then it is much more stressful!
But it is a good thing to do when you want to stress something. And we don't have to follow the rools all the time.
To break the sentence unnecessarily with a full stop and then start another with 'and' is even less stressful! To break unnecessarily, as you did, eases the reader into less of a challenge to follow what is actually being stated.
Try again!