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Originally posted by rbmorris
Anyone care to see my collection of log paintings?

A round of cider for all!
Are we allowed to constructively criticise them, whilst drinking the cider?

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Originally posted by rhb
Lighten up. If you just want your ego massaged, keep it your private forum with your buddies.

If you want constructive criticism and feedback, post it on a poetry forum. I've a feeling you know it'd get quite roundly de-constructed though.

I wouldn't post here for advice about running, nor would I post on a running forum for advice about chess.
If thereäs somethning you should knwo by now it's that I'ev had a few very strabge drikns, ok more than a dew, but im not really going to klil myself. It wa sa hoke, see? Aftre all ive saiid in tihs forum tihs is harly reasen to kill mysaelf.

Need to stop writing niw. Can't qiute focis

G'NIHHGT!

OH, portey forum sounds intersting. Canät tink why iveä nto

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Originally posted by rhb
Lighten up. If you just want your ego massaged, keep it your private forum with your buddies.

If you want constructive criticism and feedback, post it on a poetry forum. I've a feeling you know it'd get quite roundly de-constructed though.

I wouldn't post here for advice about running, nor would I post on a running forum for advice about chess.
You're not giving constructive criticism and feedback. You're overdoing it by far.

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Originally posted by SJ247
You're not giving constructive criticism and feedback.
He wasn't saying he was.

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Originally posted by stocken
If thereäs somethning you should knwo by now it's that I'ev had a few very strabge drikns, ok more than a dew, but im not really going to klil myself. It wa sa hoke, see? Aftre all ive saiid in tihs forum tihs is harly reasen to kill mysaelf.

Need to stop writing niw. Can't qiute focis

G'NIHHGT!

OH, portey forum sounds intersting. Canät tink why iveä nto
#consolts piss-drunk-translater#

Good then have a good night and for the record it's a lovelly poem, was the first time you posted it 🙂

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Originally posted by rhb
Are we allowed to constructively criticise them, whilst drinking the cider?
Absolutely not! I don't put my work on public display to get honest opinions!

You need to lie to me and reaffirm my sense of self-worth.

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Originally posted by rbmorris
Absolutely not! I don't put my work on public display to get honest opinions!

You need to lie to me and reaffirm my sense of self-worth.
The last intelligent thought you had got flushed in the toilet. You have this assumed persona as a forum non grata, but you are nothing more than a malcontent who likes to stir up trouble. Why don't you do us all a favor and sit on the sharp end of a knife?

*edit* RHB has my permission to join you.

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Originally posted by rbmorris
Absolutely not! I don't put my work on public display to get honest opinions!

You need to lie to me and reaffirm my sense of self-worth.
Can do.

You da pear! You anguish people like nobody's bizniz!

Lulz.

You matter.

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Originally posted by GalaxyShield
Can do.

You da pear! You anguish people like nobody's bizniz!

Lulz.

You matter.
I feel whole again.

Thanks! 😏

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Originally posted by shortcircuit
The last intelligent thought you had got flushed in the toilet. You have this assumed persona as a forum non grata, but you are nothing more than a malcontent who likes to stir up trouble. Why don't you do us all a favor and sit on the sharp end of a knife?

*edit* RHB has my permission to join you.
Tihs si fummy! FRIEEDSNS!!! 😀

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Originally posted by stocken
Tihs si fummy! FRIEEDSNS!!! 😀
My word. I feel like I've walked in on Retardocon© (2007) when I expected to discover the Petrol Headz Motor Show (edit - or at least something slightly less dim-witted).

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Originally posted by shortcircuit
The last intelligent thought you had got flushed in the toilet. You have this assumed persona as a forum non grata, but you are nothing more than a malcontent who likes to stir up trouble. Why don't you do us all a favor and sit on the sharp end of a knife?

*edit* RHB has my permission to join you.
Less of the capitals please, SPANKY.

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Originally posted by rbmorris
Absolutely not! I don't put my work on public display to get honest opinions!

You need to lie to me and reaffirm my sense of self-worth.
Hang on, if i lie though I'd have to say your logs were, well, crap.

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Originally posted by rbmorris
Absolutely not! I don't put my work on public display to get honest opinions!

You need to lie to me and reaffirm my sense of self-worth.
Great perspective and choice of colours! Keep up the good work!

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Originally posted by Nordlys
Great perspective and choice of colours! Keep up the good work!
Thanks! Great post! Rec'd!